draft version造句

A draft version of the paper was released last year, and it provoked a roiling debate among climate scientists.

Certainly this only the first draft version (however it is usable for me), so any corrections and Suggestions are appreciated.

Yes, say a group of open source hardware enthusiasts, who have been working on the draft version of a definition of open source hardware.

According to MOJ, the formal version is released after the draft version publicized in 2005 to solicit the opinions from central and local governments, the judicial experts and the public.

A draft version of English translations for 2,753 Chinese dishes and drinks served in restaurants has been released in Beijing recently and is now open for public opinions before it is finalized.