假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误,每句中10多...

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   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误,每句中10多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    刪除:把多余的词用斜线（)划掉。

    修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

         2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

     As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings，having   meals or waiting for buses,you can always find them addicting to their phones r complete ignoring others.

     This was really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is because smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. However, too many exposure to phones is bad for people in terms of healthy. Moreover, people engaged in phones failing to communicate well with those around them.

    As far as I concerned, people should us« phones lo help with my work and study and care more about their family and friends ruther than mobile phones.

【回答】

As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings, having meals or waiting for

buses, you can always find them addicting to their phones, complete ignoring others.

                           addicted              completely

This was really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is because smart phones

    is                                                that

nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends

through QQ and WeChat. However, too many exposure to phones is bad for people in terms

                                 much

of healthy. Moreover, people engaged in phones failing to communicate well with those

  health                                 fail

around them.

As far as I ∧ concerned, people should use phones to help with my work and study and care

        am                                         their

more about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.

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题型：短文改错