假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误,每句中最多有...

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    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减: 把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

修改: 在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

      2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Smart phones had become part of our daily life. No matter who we are, we can see people busy play with their smart phones. Smart phones benefit them. They help us escape the pressure of life and get informations. However, if we spend too much time on them, we won’t have time to contact face to face our friends and family. And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning. Meanwhile it’s absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoors activities.

【回答】

第一句  had 改为 have

第二句  who 改为 where ,  play 改为 playing

第三句   benefit 后的them 改为 us

第四句 informations 改为 information

第六句 will hurt    will 后加be

第七句 limit to our using  去掉to,     for a purpose   a 改为 the

第八句  absolute  改为 absolutely,    outdoors  改为 outdoor

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错