再读本试卷阅读理解A篇材料,依据故事情节,下午MrChen会与David谈话。请以“ATalkwithDavi...

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再读本试卷阅读理解A篇材料, 依据故事情节, 下午Mr Chen会与David谈话。请以“A Talk with David”为题续写故事, 词数100左右。

要求: 1. 仿照阅读理解A篇材料写作手法, 采用叙述、对话或二者结合的形式续写故事;

2. 内容要涉及A篇中的信件、缺课等相关信息以及Mr Chen的建议;

3. 观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅;

4. 题目与开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

A Talk with David

At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.

【回答】

At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.

“Did your mother really write that letter? ”Mr Chen asked.

David's face turned red and then pale. “No, sir, she didn't. I wrote it. I'm very sorry, sir.”

"It's the P. E, isn't it? "said Mr Chen. "You are avoiding something, aren't you? "

“Yes, sir, ”David admitted.

“And what have you been doing these Thursdays? ”Mr Chen asked.

"I have been studying in the library, "replied David eagerly.

“Oh, well, at least you didn't run off to the cinema, "said Mr Chen. "But you were very silly.

What will happen if I report this to your parents and the Principal. "

David felt ashamed of himself.

“But I won't tell anybody-if you promise me two things, "Mr Chen added.

David looked up hopefully.

"I want you to promise never to do anything like this again. If you have any problems, discuss them with your parents or with me first. Mr Long knows all about this. He has kindly agreed to help you to overcome your fear of heights. Talk to him after school on Monday. OK? ”

“Yes, sir, ”said David with a sigh of relief. “Thank you very much. "

David felt happier as he went home.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，根据A篇阅读的故事情节进行续写。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如turn red, at least, run off, look up, promise to do, help sb to do, fear of height以及with的复合结构，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

知识点：其他

题型：书面表达