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Dear Cathy,

     I am writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.

     I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money for you to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.

    What’s more, beauty is only skin-deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win others’ respect.

     As the saying goes, never judge the person by his appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.

                                                                    Yours,

                                                                    Jane

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Dear Cathy,

     I am writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just

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heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.

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     I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his

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appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes

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 will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste

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of money for you to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add︿the

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burden of your parents.

    What’s more, beauty is only skin-deep. There are many things in

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which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of

                       besides

knowledge and a warm heart will surely win others’ respect.

     As the saying goes, never judge the person by his appearance. I do

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hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.

                                         Yours,

                                          Jane

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