DearMike,YousaidyouwanttoknowalotmuchabouttheEnglishClu...
问题详情:
Dear Mike,
You said you want to know a lot much about the English Club of our school. It was three years ago when the English Club was born. It was found to improve students’ interest in English. Those interested in English got together in the multi-media classroom every Saturday afternoon. There are many activities holding in it. Students can watch diversely English films. They can as well as learn to sing English songs, which can help them learn English word by heart. In addition, many topics can be discussed there in a language. How do you like our club? I’m looking forward to early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【回答】
Dear Mike,
You said you want to know a lot about the English Club of our school. It was three years ago the English Club was born. It was to improve students’ interest in English. Those interested in English together in the multi-media classroom every Saturday afternoon. There are many activities in it. Students can watch English films. They can as well as learn to sing English songs, which can help them learn English by heart. In addition, many topics can be discussed there in language. How do you like our club? I’m looking forward to early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一处:much →more。你说你想了解更多关于我们学校的英语俱乐部的情况。a lot more"更多"是常用的表达,不能用much。
第二处:when →that。英语俱乐部诞生于三年前。本句是强调句型,基本结构是It is/was... that...,故不能把that换成when。
第三处:found →founded。建立这个俱乐部是为了提高学生对英语的兴趣。动词found是"建立"的意思,它的过去分词形式是founded。而过去分词found的原形是动词find"发现,找到"。
第四处:got →get。虽然前面两句用了一般过去时,但那是在讲述俱乐部的建立,根据"every Saturday afternoon"可知,这里说的是现在的一般情况,故要用一般现在时。
第五处:holding →held。在这里举办很多活动。分析句子结构可知,activities后面是非谓语动词短语作定语,activities与hold之间是逻辑上的被动关系,故这里应该用过去分词。
第六处:diversely →diverse。学生能看各种各样的英语电影。此处修饰English films,故要用形容词。diverse意为"各种各样的,不同的"。
第七处:去掉well后的as。as well as是连词,连接并列的成分,as well充当副词,意为"也",相当于too。根据语境,此处显然不应该用as well as,而应该用as well。
第八处:word →words。他们还能学唱英文歌曲,这能帮助他们牢记英文单词。word在此处作"单词"讲,是可数名词,其前没有冠词、物主代词等限定词,故要用复数形式。
第九处:a →the。此外,可以在这里用这种语言(即英语)讨论很多话题。这处错误很不容易改出来,因为语境*很强。上下文都在说英语俱乐部的情况,那么,在英语俱乐部里讨论话题,当然要用英语这种语言了,故这里的language是特指,而不是泛指。
第十处:在early前加your。你认为我们的英语俱乐部怎么样?我期待你的尽早回复。根据语境,这里应是"你的尽早回复",故要加上形容词*物主代词your以使语义更加明确。
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