IamsoexcitingthatIcan'twaittosharewithyouwhatIexperie...

问题详情：

   I am so exciting that I can't wait to share with you what I experienced today. I gave my first lesson in our school，which left me the deep impression.

  When I entered into the classroom，my students began to make much noise. I stood on the platform，knowing what to do at first. But soon I realized everything must be done. I asked the kids that they liked English songs. They all say “Yes.” I sang a song I had practised many times. To my great surprise，all the kids turned their attentions to my class. From this experience I know however happens，we must stay calmly first and find a wise solution.

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I am so exciting （改为excited） that I can't wait to share with you what I experienced today. I gave my first lesson in our school，which left me the(改为 a) deep impression.

  When I entered into（删去into） the classroom，my students began to make much noise. I stood on the platform，∧not （加not）knowing what to do at first. But soon I realized everything (改为something) must be done. I asked the kids that (改为whether) they liked English songs. They all say (said)“Yes.”I sang a song I had practised many times. To my great surprise，all the kids turned their attentions(改为attention) to my class. From this experience I know however(改为whatever) happens，we must stay calmly(改为 calm )first and find a wise solution.

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