(2019·宁夏吴忠中学第二学期高三年级第一次模拟)假如你是高三学生李华，三月初你在网上买了一件夹克(jack...

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(2019·宁夏吴忠中学第二学期高三年级第一次模拟)假如你是高三学生李华，三月初你在网上买了一件夹克(jacket)，打算送给妈妈作为“三八妇女节”的礼物。但到货后发现了下列一些问题，请给该网站写一封投诉信，投诉信内容如下表：

要点：

1．介绍购物情况； 

2．反映存在问题；

3．提出解决方案。

注意：1.书信内容包括以上要点；

2．词数100左右(书信格式已给出，不计入总词数)；

3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website. This morning I received the jacket on time, but 　

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【回答】

【写作指导】　本篇书面表达要求根据图表内容写一封投诉信。投诉信写作一般也是三段式结构：首段表明写作目的，告知商品有问题。第二段则写具体出现了哪些问题，自己原来的要求的和收到的分别是什么。根据图表可知，本文内一共有3个问题，颜*，尺寸，拉链。最后提出可能的解决方案，期待回复。写作时，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题；以及使用恰当的连接词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡。

(精*范文)

Dear_Sir_or_Madam，

I'm_writing_to_complain_about_the_jacket_which_I_bought_from_your_website._This_morning_I_received_the_jacket_on_time,_but I regret to say that there's something wrong with it.

Firstly, I'm pretty sure I asked you to send me a purple one. The moment the mail box arrived, I couldn't wait to open it only to find a red one. To make things worse, I need a size 170/88A while you sent me a size 175/92B, which is too large for my mother. I was really shocked to see the jacket was not the correct size and even the zipper doesn't work at all.

This was not the quality that I was expecting. My concern is whether you will refund my money or have the jacket replaced and I wonder who will pay the postage.

I_am_looking_forward_to_your_early_reply.

Yours_sincerely，

Li_Hua

知识点：提纲作文

题型：书面表达