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今天是星期天,你以"环境保护"为主题,与老师和同学们一起展开了一系列的活动。请你根据此活动,写一篇70词左右的...

今天是星期天,你以"环境保护"为主题,与老师和同学们一起展开了一系列的活动。请你根据此活动,写一篇70词左右的日记。要点包括:

1.出发时间和地点:上午8:00 ;校门口;

2.目的地:苏州市附近的一个小镇;

3.交通工具:校车;

4. 活动内容:捡垃圾、塑料袋,打扫街道,种树、种花;

5.返回时间:下午6点。

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【写作思路】

对于话题作文,句子要达意、完整、语法正确、合乎习惯,特别是句式,谓语动词的形式要有根有据,选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。写作时要注意人称和时态,注意提供的观点、材料,要注意句子的完整*,谓语动词的正确形式,句子之间的衔接和过渡。要忠实于材料,不必扩展过多,注意用好连词,多用非谓语,慎用较难的句型,一定不能写错句。

【参考范文】

Sunday     June 3, 2018     Fine

    Today I was very excited because I did a lot of things with my teachers and classmates to protect our environment. We met at the school gate at 8:00 in the morning. We went to a small town near Suzhou in our school bus. We collected litter and picked up plastic bags. We cleaned the dirty streets. Then we planted many trees and flowers. At six we came back home. I felt very tired but happy.

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